Sloanzy - Dub Creator (deep / minimal)

[sloanzy]

Just started getting into Ableton this year, here is a track i produced last week.

It has a lot of low end which won't show up on laptop speakers.

Any feedback good or bad (constructive) welcome.

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Thanks

http://www.facebook.com/djsloanzy
http://www.twitter.com/sloanzy_uk
http://www.mixcloud.com/sloanzy

[binakversailles]

Liking the moody intro! Nice sound design with the synth chords/drones in the intro!
Maybe a little less reverb on the hats tho (just my personal preference) like the sub though and the beat. Kick could possibly use a bit more low end (not much tho)
Like the vocal sample too.
Overall wicked vibes! very dark and moody! Nice production. This would be killa on a big system!

[Exhilant]

wonderful work. Favorited and followed

[sloanzy]

Thanks guys

[sloanzy]

Thanks guys

[sloanzy]

If anyone wants it I have added a free download link to this and my other track on my facebook page http://www.facebook.com/djsloanzy

[pete_bubonic]

I like the vibe of the track but the first thing that instantly hihats me is how flat the drums sound. These snares and rim/clap sounds, although masked a bit by the amount of reverb, just don't have much character to them. I also reckon the changes come the second drop aren't enough. The general mood of the track is good, but without some distinguishable progression (not just another staggered pad sound) it quickly loses grasp of my attention.