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Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by sweetleww » Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:52 pm

Any feedback would be great guys, Thanks :)

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by F U N K E N » Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:11 pm

I am partial to the evil dark stuff...this is the kind of stuff that sends me man, keep it up cant wait to hear it finished! Switch up the beats at some point though; but surely I dont need to tell u that, your on quite the right track already!

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by sweetleww » Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:20 pm

Thanks for the feedback man!

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by Faux Eden » Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:59 pm

I really love where this track is going! One thing though, the toms sound a little out of place to me

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by F U N K E N » Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:56 pm

Faux Eden wrote:I really love where this track is going! One thing though, the toms sound a little out of place to me
thats kinda what i mean, with more beats in there it wouldnt sound out of place, it certainly works for the intro...

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by Extraxion » Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:58 pm

I would add just a LITTLE bit of reverb to your wobble so it doesnt sound so dry. Other than that great job man!

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by F U N K E N » Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:02 am

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by Faux Eden » Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:25 am

Wagwan
thanks badman
safe

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by sweetleww » Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:31 am

Wicked thanks so much for the responses guys! Really appreciate it! I put the toms in and kept the original groove of the sample which was a bit off time to sort of create a lurching steppy groove.. I'm questioning it myself now, thoughts?

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by F U N K E N » Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:45 am

sweetleww wrote:Wicked thanks so much for the responses guys! Really appreciate it! I put the toms in and kept the original groove of the sample which was a bit off time to sort of create a lurching steppy groove.. I'm questioning it myself now, thoughts?
personally i love stuff that is off time, but i find it quite hard to do it properly

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Re: Looking for some feedback on a darker bit :)

Post by benjam » Sun Mar 10, 2013 10:04 am

Sounds good, +1 on lil reverb on bass

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