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Postby sweetleww » Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:52 pm

Any feedback would be great guys, Thanks :)

http://soundcloud.com/sweetleww/weakknees
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Postby F U N K E N » Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:11 pm

I am partial to the evil dark stuff...this is the kind of stuff that sends me man, keep it up cant wait to hear it finished! Switch up the beats at some point though; but surely I dont need to tell u that, your on quite the right track already!
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Postby sweetleww » Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:20 pm

Thanks for the feedback man!
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Postby Faux Eden » Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:59 pm

I really love where this track is going! One thing though, the toms sound a little out of place to me
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Postby F U N K E N » Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:56 am

Faux Eden wrote:I really love where this track is going! One thing though, the toms sound a little out of place to me

thats kinda what i mean, with more beats in there it wouldnt sound out of place, it certainly works for the intro...
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Postby Extraxion » Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:58 am

I would add just a LITTLE bit of reverb to your wobble so it doesnt sound so dry. Other than that great job man!
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Postby F U N K E N » Sun Mar 10, 2013 1:02 am

@ Faux Eden BOMBO KLAAT ono style DANGEROUS mi Bredren...me fe REMIX DAT te BLOW HOLE
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Postby Faux Eden » Sun Mar 10, 2013 1:25 am

Wagwan
thanks badman
safe
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Postby sweetleww » Sun Mar 10, 2013 4:31 am

Wicked thanks so much for the responses guys! Really appreciate it! I put the toms in and kept the original groove of the sample which was a bit off time to sort of create a lurching steppy groove.. I'm questioning it myself now, thoughts?
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Postby F U N K E N » Sun Mar 10, 2013 4:45 am

sweetleww wrote:Wicked thanks so much for the responses guys! Really appreciate it! I put the toms in and kept the original groove of the sample which was a bit off time to sort of create a lurching steppy groove.. I'm questioning it myself now, thoughts?
personally i love stuff that is off time, but i find it quite hard to do it properly
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Postby benjam » Sun Mar 10, 2013 11:04 am

Sounds good, +1 on lil reverb on bass
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