Yeah I've lost the gunshots and changed the bass synth too, sounding a lot fiercer already, will post newer version when I get chance, I'll look into snares tooLye Form wrote:I think this is really nice so i'm going to be a bit critical & say what i would do with this personally (might be 100% against what you are trying to do):
Sounds too clean - i would saturate shit and make everything a bit more.... grimy.
Lose the gun sample imo.
The main synth sound needs tweeking - i would make it 'squarer'. also you could try layering it (-12 -24) detuned etc, and playing with volume of each channel to give it some power - you can also play with eqs to give it movement. also layering it with distorted 808s would give it a more 'genuine' grime feel.
the clap could do with a grime snare layered on it (google 'wiley snares') or just cut snares out of old grime tunes (yeah cannibalism of genres etc blah blah)
I would work on giving it more space, slow it down, lots of edits to give interesting pauses and shit.
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I'm gunna have to ask for a 320 too actually, large trackdididub wrote:Cheers man. Sure about the 320, it's still unfinished, but I'll send it round when I'm done.JizzMan wrote:fuckin ell m8would love a 320, a 430 even
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Here's an updated version of that grime bit, still nowhere near finished but a lot closer to what i was originally aiming for, the feedback and advice has been so helpful, thanks
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I'd low pass that bass sound,bring the cuttoff to around halfway and resonance up till you get a bit of a dirtier wub bass.
Not a fan of grime but nice track Jim
Not a fan of grime but nice track Jim
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Sine sub under that unless I'm missing something entirely on this lappy. Envelope on what lloydy of london said.
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Milton Keynes actually,it's like a shit version of London lolnowaysj wrote:Sine sub under that unless I'm missing something entirely on this lappy. Envelope on what lloydy of london said.
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going to use this double post for jim, the tunes sounds much better than last time, well done man
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particle-jim wrote:I'm gunna have to ask for a 320 too actually, large trackdididub wrote:Cheers man. Sure about the 320, it's still unfinished, but I'll send it round when I'm done.JizzMan wrote:fuckin ell m8would love a 320, a 430 even
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and some of that!lloydy wrote:I'd low pass that bass sound,bring the cuttoff to around halfway and resonance up till you get a bit of a dirtier wub bass.
made this earlier today, my daw says 3 hours of work so im well happy with that. been trying to up my work rate recently

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Gewze wrote:going to use this double post for jim, the tunes sounds much better than last time, well done man



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impressive stuff so far guys 
my latest tune, not finished and on a deep tip
EDIT- finished it
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my latest tune, not finished and on a deep tip
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-Cheeky like it but if it was me id layer the hats up a bit, but that just personal i like kinda weighty hats i guess 
alrighty now, not really what is classify this as other than its 130 bpm, any advice is welcome
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alrighty now, not really what is classify this as other than its 130 bpm, any advice is welcome

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