I'm looking for some opinions on the melody in part of this track. Feel free to give feed back on anything in this song, but I'm mostly concerned with the melody/lead that comes in @ 0:39 and then repeats later on. ie. give me your first impressions on it and whether or not you think it fits. I want to get an objective opinion on it before i go any further with the song in case i decide to rewrite that melody.
Thanks ahead of time. Feedback for feedback if you want, just let me know.
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I realize the SC player says the track can't be played outside of SC. Just click the link to go to the page and I'll pay more attention to the settings next time i upload something.