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villpower
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by villpower » Tue Apr 09, 2013 7:23 pm
The track:
Soundcloud
Yeah, so again a new one. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. How to improve the mix?
My ears are so raped.
But yeah, listen to the track and enjoy it

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chrondor
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by chrondor » Tue Apr 09, 2013 10:01 pm
The track has a good feel, but some of the production could be improved. The reverb on the snare is either making it sound really unnaturally echoey, and the hi hats sound like they're intruding on your midrange. Maybe an HPF and compressor for the hats to make it a bit dancier? Also the mid-range stabby synth that's going throughout the beginning and the end only plays one note the whole time, I feel even a little variation would benefit the track greatly.
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Leave Blank
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by Leave Blank » Tue Apr 09, 2013 11:06 pm
nice tune. like the off kilter hats. love the dubby tech stab but it does get a bit grating. the lower percs and the highers sound a bit disjointed. Try sending all percussion thru a subtle room verb to give it a feeling of connectedness.
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villpower
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by villpower » Tue Apr 09, 2013 11:43 pm
Yeah its the predelay in the snare. I have made one version with much more mellower hats and not so midrangey. I guess i will try the subtle reverb treatment for the percs and maybe do something with the synth.
Thank you guys! It is really nice that you can get some decent feedback on this forum.

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chrondor
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by chrondor » Tue Apr 09, 2013 11:44 pm
actually, normally no one gives feedback, most of my tunes float to the bottom without any responses, just views haha
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villpower
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by villpower » Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:48 am
Well.. Uploaded a new one with mellower high-mid percs. Almost all the percs have really subtle room reverb to blend them together much nicer. Also added more variation to the synths which was a nice add if I might say. Thank you for the feedback. So yeah there it is.

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