hey all heres a tune i did for my college project :)

[sound warrior]

hey all i havn't posted here in a wile. I'm sound warrior from the uk i'm totally blind, heres a tune i made for a college project i made it with reaper and hardware Instruments

link to tune:

http://soundcloud.com/t1_soundwarrior/i ... chno-night all constructive criticism is welcome i havn't made many tunes so i'm still learning i hope you all injoy it respect and blessings sound warrior

[AMG]

First let me say, if this is what you're passionate about, keep it up. It may sound lame to you, but the fact that you're blind and taking steps to produce something seems like quite a challenge. So respect for that. Now for your tune, I think that you are on the right track with a build of with your structure. I think if you really practice on clarity with your sound, such as the way the beat develops you will really open up larger avenues in terms of producing the sound you want. I look forward to seeing you grow with your producing. Thanks for sharing.

[sound warrior]

thanks for your reply a m g its good you said some constructive things and not just "this tune is shit" like so many do what software and hardware do you use to produce? know any thing about reaper? what advice can you give me on inproving sound clarrity? thanks in advance respect sound warrior

[SKIN E]

hey man, good to see your posting some stuff on here! bet you had massive fun on the gear you made it with! one massive thing I would suggest is play with the velocity of drums and perc as opposed to every hit the same volume

[sound warrior]

thanks for that adviccce skin-e any one know how to ajussst hit volisity on the korg electribe?

[AMG]

Sound Warrior, I actually do not produce. I rap, I'm on these forums partially because my friend and my producer does dubstep as well as other genres. And forget those people who have nothing positive to say. I wouldn't give them a second thought, because those who try to break you down have moot opinions. As far as you progressing, timing is a huge factor. I have found that when I listen to a beat and I try to decide how I want to construct my flow and words to integrate into it, I make a lot of gibberish type sounds to give me an idea of the basic formula to use. I hum to myself as well. You can use a similar method with the synths and kicks or snares etc. Everyone has their own method, but timing while you cultivate your sound is especially imperative, that way everything lines up and you can go from there. Transitioning from patterns and sounds is also huge. You may want to think about how you want to give your audience incentive on listening to your music. If there is too much of the same, or things are congested sonically then that can put listeners off. Play around and really think about a specific sound you favor, one that you want to be known by. Then once you're on that track experiment and learn by trial and error, practice, and wisdom from others. Keep up the work man. Peace.