@NITEMERE
Lmao nice sample at the start, I forgot what program that was, I remember playing with that in elementary. Anyways, overall a decent track. I love that midrange bass you have, the drop can be more hyped imo, it seems really dry and lacks a couple things to make it flourish and really slap like more rides, white noise effects, perhaps an arp and rushed melody to give it that extra boost. I like your moombah sound. The screamo vocal is a nice addition. I just feel that it could use some work on the drop, more so just additions than revisions in your case (if I were writing this). Overall a nice track mate!
@AcidRat
Love the subbass intro, the melody sort of reminds me of the palace by m machine. I love your mild percussion. That guitar doesn't not fit well with your melody imo, it sounds mildly off. Overall a nice addition nontheless once the pad disappears. The vocal could use a little work, like widening and reverb or delay. I don't mind your build up synth. That white noise is a nice addition for the drop. I personally was disappointed by the drop but it has a nice groove to it. Reminds me of a LoZ dungeon. I personally feel the guitar or the actual melodies itself could be removed, but its your track and my opinion. I enjoy the different vibe it brings from your traditional dubstep song. Overall a decent track. Again I feel your drop needs more livening up with rush rides or white noise or heavy basses. The drop could definitely use an arp or more drum sounds/fx to give a feel of liveliness.
@Jayrage
I love once the kick kicks in. Very funky. . It's a very simple yet effective beat. That riser could be turned down a bit though, it kind of startled me at first. I love your funky synths to accompany your drop. Everything is sounding nice and groovy. I would love to hear a revised snare/clap imo but it definitely adds to that dirty south esque vibe. Overall a nice track mate!
@filtersnake
I love the rush of bpm in this one. I like your arp in the background and your filtering melody. Your drop is sexy. I love it.Very gnarly growl. Nice and wide. The second drop is fucking sick bro. I love your piano arp for the drop. That 80s snare roll inbetween your drops is a wonderful additional. I love your use of delay and arrangement of all the vocals. Vey cool. Im loving this remix. Keep it up!
@marlin
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@dj Cappa
Very eerie. Reminds me of casper for some reason. or the 1950s. I love once your kick and snare come in, the snare could maybe use like a dB or 2.
I enjoyed your melodic addition that comes with the drums. I like your nerufunk reese that is introduced for the build up. The drop itself is quite endearing. It's not too drastic or minimal, it flows nicely with the whole theme you have going on. Again that snare could be turned up a dB or 2 to make it more prominent. I love your minimalistic reese basses! Great track man
@difference
I like your wahwahwah at the start. I could imagine hearing this while playing doom or something. Very eerie use of those pads/choir type sounds. Very cool and sinister. The hats could use a little bit of reverb imo. I like how you introduced the dialogue then the drop. Very flowing, very minimalistic and suspenseful
I like your "DUM DUM DUM" subbass that is during the drop. I liek your rush rides that build up the tension of the track. A very minimal and simple beat but highly effective. I could imagine hearing this in a dark space type game. Cool truck bruh!
@Lukeraith
I love your intro. It reminds me alot of deep house styles. This track has potential. I would enjoy listening to this while I study
Very minimal but has a nice vibe to it. imo it gets a little boring but I could see that your introducing new sounds as it progresses which is admirable. Very progressive and techy. Your second drop is sick, very heavy for it's style. I think your clap could be brought up a bit through compression or another dB to give it more prominence in your mix. I think your filtered wubs hhas a little too much resonance imo but everything is sounds nice and smooth. Great work friend
@MilkyThomas
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@Ada
I instantly fell in love with your melody and choice of synth mixture. That drop is sick!!!!! I love this track, very jazzy but very videogame/anime/futuristic esque vibe. I LOVE when you introduce that subbass and your arps with the dialogue. This song is so cool dude. Im loving it. I personally feel your dnb loops can use some widening to accompany your wide melodies, just so it sounds that much more bigger and has more bang. Overall such a beautiful track man, I would love to hear the finished product!
@SMOR3S
Very sick intro, Im loving your synth mixtures. That wide pad really makes a big difference. The melody is pretty decent, reminds me of hardstyle in a sense
Once the drums and sounds come in I can really feel your beat man, Im loving that trippy robotic synth sound. The drop is SICK! Im loving the sketchy harsh sounds youve got going on. This is definitely on its way to a sick tune bruh. Maybe your snare could be compressed more or the high end brought out just a tad. I personally feel it could use more dynamics in turn of melodic arrangement of the drop, perhaps a little different during the second time around, but I fall victim to this as well lol. Keep it up
Hey guys, I basically wanted to share this dnb vocal track I finally am almost ready to master. any feedback is greatly appreciated
Soundcloud
You got some good ideas in this song but i think you need to EQ out the sounds a bit more and adjust the levels. There is isn't much of a build-up? With this type of Dubstep is all about getting the build-up and anticipation going for the drop. But I'm sure you'll be able to work on these things 
I think the bass sounds need to be layered up with a bit more beef in the lower-end. I think incorporating a transition or something after 8/16 bars would be cool
. In terms of EQ, first of all, I would low cut everything that's not the sub bass. Where exactly to cut it is up to you, I'd just play with it until you find the spot where it doesn't take away too much from the sound, but makes it sit nicely in track. (I have my bass growls and stuff low cut around 70Hz, and my background pads / etc cut around 411Hz, for example.) Also, you might want to just turn the sub bass down a little, it takes up a bunch of room in the track right now. There isn't really a build up, but this doesn't seem like a finished piece, so that might be coming later.
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