Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

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purplegreenredblew
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Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by purplegreenredblew » Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:36 pm

reply with constructive criticism and ill do the same for you. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/p0ak/meter/s-PL7SS

why doesn't this show the player? >.<

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by Catoff » Mon Jun 10, 2013 8:45 am

Hi, I think you have several good ideas in there. Good bass and leads. My only crtiticism would be about the drums. In my opinion, they need more prominence.

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by purplegreenredblew » Mon Jun 10, 2013 6:51 pm

:h:
thanks for the feedback! I was listening to your songs, i commented on one of them, what synth are you using for that? if you don't mind me asking.

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by purplegreenredblew » Mon Jun 10, 2013 6:59 pm

also any suggestions on the drums?

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by MrPies » Mon Jun 10, 2013 11:59 pm

That is completely bonkers! I like it. Agree with purplegreenredblew about the drums.
Others may have different thoughts, but to make them more prominent you could try:
- Higher quality samples (if they aren't already). I'm am new on here, so I am not sure how people feel about advocating particular samples over others. But that is key in my opinion.
- EQ boost to where bits of the drums that you want to stand out.
- EQ cut to other elements that aren't drums at that frequency
- Layering snares.

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by purplegreenredblew » Wed Jun 12, 2013 5:57 am

thanks for the reply mrpies, honestly the drums are just from a vengeance pack layered with a subby sidechained kick, but a little EQ may do the trick in this case.

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Re: Xaleen - Meter [dirty]

Post by MrPies » Wed Jun 12, 2013 9:41 am

ah ok - I am preaching to the choir in that case. Vengeance is what I (and most others I am sure) use.
Yeah, maybe making room for the drum with Eq will help, would love to hear other peoples thoughts though.

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