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HAIKU KRU

Post by kablammo » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:11 pm

DOES ANYONE ELSE; PROPERLY
APPRECIATE THIS, FORM OF
POEM?
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Post by phaelon » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:15 pm

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Post by kablammo » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:19 pm

WHERE'S UR HAIKU THEN???? :lol: :lol:
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Post by phaelon » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:22 pm

Kablammo is right.
I shall present my haiku.
Read it out loud please.
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Post by drum syndicate » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:31 pm

As long as it is
seventeen syllables
the form is optional


these are often known as freeform or contemporary haiku
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Post by two oh one » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:32 pm

No, I don't.
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Post by perkalerk215 » Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:39 pm

i can appreciate the good ones. but theyre kinda wack usually.like the jazz of poety to me. :|
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Post by vonboyage » Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:04 pm

Whats wrong with normal poems?








im only saying that cause i dont understand haiku...
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Post by kablammo » Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:30 pm

Phaelon wrote:Kablammo is right.
I shall present my haiku.
Read it out loud please.
GOOD EFFORT :lol:
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Post by spooKs » Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:32 pm

Fi-i-i-i-ive
Sev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ev-ven
Fi-i-i-i-ive
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Post by thomas » Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:00 am

Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
Whats wrong with Jazz?
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Post by ajantis_art » Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:01 am

ca'an tom where's your input bruz
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Post by perkalerk215 » Thu Sep 13, 2007 12:10 am

Thomas wrote:
Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
Whats wrong with Jazz?
nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..

not that theres anything wrong with that.. :roll:
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Post by classagraphics » Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:39 am

i think that jazz is
probably the least asian
musical format
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Post by sri » Thu Sep 13, 2007 3:10 am

perkalerk215 wrote:
Thomas wrote:
Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
Whats wrong with Jazz?
nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..

not that theres anything wrong with that.. :roll:
maybe jazz is just too complex for you to understand. :P
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Post by perkalerk215 » Thu Sep 13, 2007 1:08 pm

sri wrote:
perkalerk215 wrote:
Thomas wrote:
Vonboyage wrote:Whats wrong with normal poems?
Whats wrong with Jazz?
nothing wrong with it, but its all over the place. doesnt make sense to me. much like these kinds of poems. not that theyre all over the place, but they seem like words thrown together to attempt some kind of poem...like jazz is a bunch of music thrown together..

not that theres anything wrong with that.. :roll:
maybe jazz is just too complex for you to understand. :P
maybe you should stop creepin under other peoples names :P

and jazz just does nothing for me. has nothing to do with understanding it or not. just doesnt appeal to me..
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