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[rockadillzy]

Hi yall, i was just wanting to have some other ears listen to this tune i cooked up its not dubstep i just say to hell with genres... but if you could gimmie some pointers on the song like if anything sticks out sounds harsh etc i just need some other minds to listen to it rather than my buddies cause they will support me even if i knock a beat on a door lol. after i get some word back im gonna put all the finishing touches i need on it like the beginning and stuff but idk if this is just me but does the choir not fit right? but yeahh thanksSoundcloud

one love,mad love

--rocka

[Harkat]

The choir isn't the problem, that sounds alright. The drums and the bassline sound pretty bad though. The sub is completely monotonous and flabby, and the hats and snares lack impact. Try layering, maybe?

[Herbimore]

Hey man, I think you need to work on your composition. You should work on something that has a bit more of a hook to it, some more cohesive ideas, dont just add random stuff in.

[Lateral_Sync]

I agree with Herbimore. You need some texture in there too. It feels very sterile. That could just be me though since I like to layer the crap out of my songs with multiple melodies on top of melodies. Though I liked the feel of tension at about 1:40.

[rockadillzy]

thanks yall.. yeah i know its alot of things to try and work out. i will say that i fail at engineering anything i make and i sequence my work a lil weird and it can be repetitive