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Post by gaff » Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:38 pm


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Post by municiple » Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:49 pm

Sounds nice and mellow, but it never really drops. I like the spaciousness of it, but was waiting for the drums to drop a bit more. Keep the tunes coming!

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Post by elgato » Fri Apr 07, 2006 4:56 pm

really, really good in my opinion

i think the drums are lovely, very subtle, which i rated

good atmospherics, well produced, perhaps not my exact 'vibe' as it were, but i think thats a matter of taste not skill.

only thing id say is maybe a bit of variation on the bassline (maybe you've done that already later) as i reckon something a bit softer and more flowing might bring the track together really nicely

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Post by gaff » Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:08 pm

fanku not bad for a girl hey--- :wink:

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Post by elgato » Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:23 pm

Not at all, nice to hear girls making beats, there isnt enough of that (from what i know anyways), im sure so many females would have a lot to offer electronic music if they got into production...we need more Ellen Alliens and Andrea Parkers!

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Post by gaff » Fri Apr 07, 2006 5:27 pm

fanku darlings mwah.x

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Post by subframe » Fri Apr 07, 2006 6:39 pm

I'm really liking this. Atmos are excellent. That big bass warp that comes after the drop is nice as well.

Only one question - is that little click on the kick in the beginning there on purpose, no?

320 me? :D
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Post by gaff » Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:42 pm

yeah i was meant to do that my boyfreind learnt that from someone on here sweety

hugz,you can have a 320 whatever that is when i find out what it is

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Post by subframe » Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:48 pm

320kbps mp3, is what I meant.

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Post by dubweiser » Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:51 pm

nice one!
in my opinion it has potential to be a nice track to send people home in the end of a rave, you just need to change the clap sample and make more time into it (with the help of bass variations, and some changes in the middle).
keep up the good work!

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Post by 8bitwonder » Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:53 pm

good tune baby

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Post by auralassassin » Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:15 pm

not bad for a guy, either... really.

add some more low end to this. I like the clap though, no sense in getting too intricate with the high ends on a dubstep track--the atmosphere is on, now get that low end with some serious bass.

you know the kind I'm talking about... the stuff that hits you in the chest and makes your legs shake.

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Post by ramadanman » Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:23 pm

pretty sweet track

yeh i agree on the more low end comment

you could even add a really deep sub on the kick, then release on the snare

very cool atmosphere

would have liked slightly more intricate hats, or maybe just more variation?

its pretty cool

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Post by auralassassin » Sat Apr 08, 2006 6:27 pm

yea, as far as variation on the hits, you don't even really need to ADD more to it, just kinda studder the hits, so that they are't so formulaec... more of a broken beat feel.. that would be pretty dope. the atmosphere is definately pretty cool though, so don't modify that too much :P

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Post by acetone » Sun Apr 09, 2006 7:28 am

yes, VERY nice track. Basically break up the drums a bit and beef up the sub. But whatever you do, don't lose the smoothness. I can't wait to hear the finished track.

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Post by Sharmaji » Sun Apr 09, 2006 8:18 am

excellent late, late, late nite or early, early, early mornin' chune.

respect.

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