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Optimus_X
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by Optimus_X » Sun Oct 13, 2013 10:31 am
Hi guys ,
There's a new tune i made like 2 days ago. It's made only with FM Synths. So I wanna know what do you think of it and asking you for some feedback. Thanks
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wub
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by wub » Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:26 am
Lots of midrange noises going on here, made it sound a little hectic at times. Felt the drums were getting a little lost under the cacophony at times.
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Optimus_X
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by Optimus_X » Tue Oct 15, 2013 2:58 pm
Yoo thanks for the reply.
Well, I know for the midrange noises but the problem comes from my computer (only 2gb RAM) and I'm not very good at mastering

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wub
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by wub » Tue Oct 15, 2013 3:15 pm
Not sure why your computers RAM would affect how the tune sounds in terms of too many things going on at once?
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Optimus_X
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by Optimus_X » Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:19 pm
Well actually i think that is my computer, because I can't really put all the things I want due to memory limit. At least that's what I think, but maybe it's just me that didn't tweaked sytrus well (FM is a bit complicated, need to be more precise).
And there aren't too many things going in, just an FM Bass

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rockonin
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by rockonin » Sat Oct 26, 2013 10:29 am
Like Wub said there's no definition in the drums.
Consider highpassing the bass more to make a little bit more room for the kick (also take a look at you sample choice if you have layered them)
The snare sounds weak as well (needs more punch). Personally i would use a high shelf eq on the high hats to add a little more top end to the track with a little reverb.
Use more variation in the transitions as well. The bass sounds great. Good work.
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Optimus_X
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by Optimus_X » Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:50 pm
Thank you for your reply. I'll try to consider your advices for my next tracks

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