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Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Wed Oct 16, 2013 10:15 pm

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here the video clip: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MhFVoFa5aMk&hd=1
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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by wub » Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:42 am

Drums are a bit on the quiet side, so when you've got the electro stabs and midrange bass hitting, they're getting a bit drowned out. Would suggest another look at the mixdown to get the levels up a bit.

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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by Sure_Fire » Thu Oct 17, 2013 12:43 pm

I'd take a look at the arrangement, some of the notes playing are a little off key, and a lot of the noises are very random sounding. The section at 2:53 sounded a little better, more musical than the rest of the track. Probably need to listen to some more melodic music, I'd suggest some Dream Theater or Symphony X, I grew up listening to progressive metal so that's where I get most of my musicality from.

Also, Try monoizing the bottom part of the kick drum, you've get some very low frequencies coming through in stereo. Basslane by tone projects is an awesome vst for that, only need to make the bottom 200hz ish mono.
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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Thu Oct 17, 2013 2:15 pm

thanks for your message!

yeah the mix could be better, but i did my best ahah (i used few monitoring speakers ands rooms)

i dont know if i freeze all my instruments and restart a mix in an other ableton file.... maybe one day...

I agree with you with the great section in 2mn53 :) maybe i will keep it longer, but its not the spirit i want to give to this track
(more complextro)

Sorry for my english and check the video clip ! :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MhFVoFa5aMk&hd=1

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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Fri Nov 08, 2013 7:11 pm

i've heard your suggestion!

A new track is born!

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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:35 pm

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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Mon Dec 30, 2013 7:03 pm

hello friends!

New Massive Electro and dubstep track:

'til the party gone wrong

Listen and comment ;))))) !

https://soundcloud.com/digitallyrics

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Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep

Post by dlyrics » Tue Feb 11, 2014 12:22 am

Complextro Progressive: X-case!

Share and comment if you like;)

https://soundcloud.com/digitallyrics/x-case

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