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melodik
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by melodik » Thu Nov 14, 2013 6:07 pm
havent posted in ages...
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any crit/feedback will be bless!!
give thanks in advance!

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wub
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by wub » Fri Nov 15, 2013 6:53 am
Intro was a bit too long, could do with being at least halved if you're not introducing the main elements until ~56s. Track is also feeling very quiet, the kick in particular has a lot of thud and not much else, so maybe consider layering it up or else bringing it up in the mix.
The neuro growls are a nice touch, and I liked how the pads built ~2m54s, gave some nice atmospherics before the break. Percussion switch up after the drop for the final third was good for keeping things interesting, but overall the tune felt slightly too long given it's relatively slow pacing.
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melodik
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by melodik » Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:48 am
Thanks for the feedback man always appreciated

Im in a new room so still getting used to the acoustics and such but yeah the kick is very loud compared to the rest. it shouldve been 4 min I agree. Bless up for your time though!
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by wub » Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:51 am
Fair enough re; the acoustics. I find that even A/B'ing the track through monitors and headphones can help with some mixdown issues?
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melodik
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by melodik » Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:02 am
yeah I was struggling with the mixdown for a few months now no kidding lol. I probly started missing the wood from the trees, shouldve moved on to something new long ago haha. give thanks again for your time though man. Forward ever!
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by wub » Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:10 am
melodik wrote:yeah I was struggling with the mixdown for a few months now no kidding lol. I probly started missing the wood from the trees, shouldve moved on to something new long ago haha. give thanks again for your time though man. Forward ever!
No worries man...pay it forward though! If you can, take some time to give feedback to another tune in this forum

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melodik
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by melodik » Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:20 am
most definitely man, Ive been slacking in that regard in a big way

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