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Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by Jez-R » Thu Nov 28, 2013 1:56 am

My latest tune im close to completing, all if any feedback is wecome :)
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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by wub » Thu Nov 28, 2013 7:41 am

Interesting sound design, like some of the woodblock style percussion hits in there. Felt the bass patch was a little drone like though, could do with a bit of variation on the pattern it's playing :)

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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by Jez-R » Sat Nov 30, 2013 10:23 am

Cheers wub, The bass i had to bump down to wav before adding to track because my laptop cant handle much more than drums and 1 synth played together, i Then made mistake of not saving my bass synth so cant resample as easy
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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by Echoi » Sat Nov 30, 2013 10:41 am

Love that intro, great work there. The drop though, made my head hurt a little, I just could not separate between the melody and the mid bass. Was really trying to listen to the bass and the melody was getting in the way, was kinda too bright and overshadowed what the drop should have been about, the bass.

Tis a catchy little number for sure, perhaps the melody should be saved for later on in the track? Agree with Wub too, bass needs some touching up, kinda sounds like it's being played from a different source, if you get me?

Defo some work to be done, but you're onto something, keep it up.

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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by Jez-R » Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:55 pm

Cheers Echoi for feedback. IL be putting this project on hold for a bit as iv got carried away on another track, plus the project file is a little messi.
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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by HIGH10 » Tue Dec 03, 2013 5:40 pm

Did you try to copy Zeds Dead - Rudeboy?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BdXDT-5jci0

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Re: Jez-R - ~ UFO "Demo" 140bpm Bass

Post by Jez-R » Tue Dec 03, 2013 6:08 pm

by HIGH10 » Tue Dec 03, 2013 6:40 pm
Did you try to copy Zeds Dead - Rudeboy?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BdXDT-5jci0
Errr... i have not, err... heard of this "Zeds Dead" :roll:
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