Phonomancer - "Interactions" (Trap/140bpm/Glitch?)

[phonomancer]

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Let me know your thoughts, DSF!

[ehbes]

wasn't a massive fan of the vocal in the intro, seemed way too out of place, got better as the track went on.

the meloody at 1:30 should be the focus of the track through out and not the squeaky thing

[Echoi]

Snare is drifting in and out of the mix, listen to the first 10 seconds of the drop, concentrate on the snare, when that white noise type sounds fades, snare will be nice and clean, yet when the next set of sounds come in its muddied again and continues like this throughout.

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[re6ter]

The snare is interesting on this one. Atmos is strong. I like how the lead synth is kind of offbeat in a way (Idk how to explain it), has shuffle or groove or swing... whatever its called lol xD. Cool man.

[phonomancer]

wasn't a massive fan of the vocal in the intro, seemed way too out of place, got better as the track went on.

the meloody at 1:30 should be the focus of the track through out and not the squeaky thing

Yeah man I hear you in regards to the vocal sample. I had trouble getting it to fit into the overall composition, although I think the way it develops into the song later on makes it fit in hindsight. The "squeaky thing" is actually the vocal sample bit-crushed and tuned to key an octave (or two?) up. Personally, I love it. Thanks for the feedback though man, I appreciate it.

Snare is drifting in and out of the mix, listen to the first 10 seconds of the drop, concentrate on the snare, when that white noise type sounds fades, snare will be nice and clean, yet when the next set of sounds come in its muddied again and continues like this throughout.

Now, get involved giving feedback to other's

Hm, I kinda see what you're saying, but honestly on my monitors the snare sounds pretty clear. I try not to let the kick and snare clash at the lead of the mix. I'll admit, it does get slightly muddled, though, which sucks on my part. Sorry you had to listen to it if you didn't enjoy it. Thanks for the post though. Also, I don't think it's required that I give feedback on this forum, even though I do anyways. I also frequently leave comments on SoundCloud tracks, independent and otherwise. I just happen to produce a lot of music, and I enjoy providing content. Thanks again, though.

The snare is interesting on this one. Atmos is strong. I like how the lead synth is kind of offbeat in a way (Idk how to explain it), has shuffle or groove or swing... whatever its called lol xD. Cool man.

Glad you think so man! It's great to hear you liked it. Sounds like we're on the same page brotha.

[koncide]

2nd the comments about the snare, I reckon it should come up in the mix a bit.

Might be a trap cliche but snare rolls would work well in this tune as well.

[re6ter]

Trap rolls are usually nice in trap, Just sayin xD lol

[phonomancer]

2nd the comments about the snare, I reckon it should come up in the mix a bit.

Might be a trap cliche but snare rolls would work well in this tune as well.

Pretty sure I included some trap snare rolls at both 0:58 and 1:12. Maybe that's not what you meant? But yeah I guess I could've gotten a little more creative with them. My concern is crowding the high end with high-hats, white noise AND snare rolls. Thanks for the post though man!

[re6ter]

Then tune down the samp a bit or eq out the higher freqs.