First Song (Clip) Resident Evil

[Hawbon]

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First sound I uploaded to soundcluod, first song I made in ableton, still unfinished, No FX added, but I still thought it was pretty nifty. Feedback?

[H_2]

I get a primus vibe. I like it. Feels like the bass is hitting a llittle too low and thats on headphones so a real sound system would probably have a bad day just imo

[Hawbon]

This was before I figured out the different kicks, So i was just using a standard kick from the ableton instrument rack.

[Rezzo]

Sounds like it's really clipping. Take a look at this thread and learn a bit about mixing, even if you don't go in depth you can check tips on how to keep your master from clipping and what not. I mean you may not even be clipping, if that's the case then you have a LOT of distortion in there. Keep practicing buddy you'll get it. Feel free to PM me if you want to talk, I don't want to sound like I'm talking down to anybody but I remember when I first started, my tracks were VERY similar to the post you made.

All the best.

EDIT: And by no means am I an expert.