How to transition?

[Hawbon]

I'm still thinking on ideas to fix/tweak it, whats your opinions on panning heartbeat rhythm for kick?

[Rezzo]

I'm still thinking on ideas to fix/tweak it, whats your opinions on panning heartbeat rhythm for kick?

You'll never know until you try brother. Experimentation is key, trust.

[bennyfroobs]

if aphex twin released this it would be like

WOW
GENIUS

fuck you guys big tune man keep it up

it really really wouldnt.

this sounds like a load of farting bumblebees trapped inside a giant balloon

props for the originality tho

[bennyfroobs]

I'm still thinking on ideas to fix/tweak it, whats your opinions on panning heartbeat rhythm for kick?

it sounds weird as fuck anyway man u might as well haha

post the results

[Rezzo]

if aphex twin released this it would be like

WOW
GENIUS

fuck you guys big tune man keep it up

it really really wouldnt.

this sounds like a load of farting bumblebees trapped inside a giant balloon

props for the originality tho

[MaZa1]

Im sorry but i just dont understand what i just listened...
I thought that you posted the intro/build up and the drop is where the clip ends...So to me the whole track sounds like some crazy intro/ build up...

But now when i did read this topic and listened it again couple of times, to me one of the problems i hear is that your build up/drop sounds flat.
So one thing i suggest is leave some space after the build up so ppl can actually notice when the drop hits.

[Phigure]

wow i just heard skream play this on rinse.fm, limited white label release, test presses out next friday

[OGLemon]

dynamics are on a mad ting doe. add some white noise and a nasty car factory kick drum and you'll be big in the techno scene.

[didi]

Thanks guys, for the most part you've all been positive, I still don't really know what I'm doing, its all a big mess right now, I have a couple more sounds on my profile that are in my opinion a little more put together, I'm going to keep working on it and post the end result. I still cant tell if the positiveness on this was serious but it brightened my day nonetheless because I cant tell if its sarcasm or not

together, I'm going to keep working on it and post the end result. I still cant tell if the positiveness on this was serious but it brightened my day nonetheless because I cant tell if its

it brightened my day

[Hawbon]

^ this.

[bennyfroobs]

i dont like it when ppl touch my nipples but girls seem to love doing it to me but im like nah man its not the same 4 me as it is 4 u it just feels weird plz stop

[ezza]

do you know theres 80% of the sensitivity in a mans nipples as there is in his clitoris

read it in a womans mag

[ThisIsSovereign]

i dont like it when ppl touch my nipples but girls seem to love doing it to me but im like nah man its not the same 4 me as it is 4 u it just feels weird plz stop

I feel u m8790, my gf does it to me all the time and I don't like it.

[Hawbon]

Soundcloud
I fix, added, and finished my pile of shit, im happy with my pile of shit, I bid you all a good day!

[bennyfroobs]

aint my thing but if u worked on the tune from 26 seconds onwards some mroe, i think it would go down really well with some people, legit
like jose (or someone) said, it sounds like some weir daphex twin style ting

like if u stuck a break in at 53 seconds, worked on ur build ups n shit, worked on ur drums, and if actaully put some bass in there (u need some fat subbass in there tbh man my ears are disappointed by the lack of low end- remember to make it mono cos i been hearin lots of people with ridiculously wide subbass on here sometimes) it would be fairly interesting. youve got a couple of really ace sounds. you could try resampling from the tune to make them into more appropriate 8/16 bar loops n what have u. read up on basic dubstep song structure and stuff if u havent done that already, listen to some songs by decent producers and see how they do build ups and transiutions and stuff (avoid brostep, listen to people who can actually compose decent music, like aphex twin- sry to state the obv suggestion haha)

but honestly tho scrap the first 26 seconmds man that bit is extremely wack and doesnt fit the second half of the song at all

^ hope that was useful

[SunkLo]

Dawg let me introduce you to my friend snare drum. You guys are gonna be good buddies.

[re6ter]

There's a million people doing it right, we need some people doing it wrong to figure out some new shit.

true wordz.

Never give up. Keep dropping that mtalk bro, shits fire.

ya ditch the mtalk homie



10000 hours until you master somthing bro, keep at it.

[MaZa1]

Dawg let me introduce you to my friend snare drum. You guys are gonna be good buddies.

What happened to drums after the "drop"? Kick is somewhere in there but no snare?

and wheres sub?

[Samuel_L_Damnson]

Im not even kidding either. If you added more stereo movement and weird fx, that would be like a mint soundscapey alien space noises thing.

[hubb]

@hawbon

it's pretty cool as it is tbh. I like how it isn't static and how all of the parts seem to flow. keep it up. maybe throw in a couple of voice samples or a cut up accapella or something though?