Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

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sciaticamusic
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Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by sciaticamusic » Sun Dec 22, 2013 8:25 pm

Downtempo track I made using samples from Frank Sinatra's "When I was 17"
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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Euphoric)

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Mon Dec 23, 2013 5:44 am

Overall it sounded really nice :4:, only thing I'd say is bring the snare forward more cause it sounded like it was in the background of the track. Maybe that's what you want but I like having the snare more prominent.

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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Euphoric)

Post by sciaticamusic » Thu Dec 26, 2013 12:21 am

thanks dude. yea i was trying to have the snare/clap sound far away. maybe a little to far lol

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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by dahovv » Sat Dec 28, 2013 2:50 am

Awesome melody.

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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by CRIS FERN » Sat Dec 28, 2013 7:33 pm

I don't know why but in the intro and when the track drops that high bell melody part sounds a bit off at the end.

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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by cpdwane » Mon Dec 30, 2013 12:52 pm

I love the feeling this track has, and personally I'm not even sure there's anything wrong with the snare being as distant sounding as it does (it still has enough of a presence). The only elements I'm not so sure about are the bits where the constant high hat comes in... maybe you could pan it or something to make it a bit more varied? Maybe you also generally have a little too much at the high end and not much in the way of mids? Only small critisicms really, this track has a nice vibe otherwise and it's a pleasure to listen to :)
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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by binakversailles » Mon Dec 30, 2013 3:35 pm

lovely melody really nice smooth sound. Nice mixdown too! sounding lush. I like the arrangement alot as well. Keep up the good work!

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Re: Sciatica-Time To Go (Downtempo/Melodic)

Post by sciaticamusic » Tue Dec 31, 2013 8:15 pm

cpdwane wrote:I love the feeling this track has, and personally I'm not even sure there's anything wrong with the snare being as distant sounding as it does (it still has enough of a presence). The only elements I'm not so sure about are the bits where the constant high hat comes in... maybe you could pan it or something to make it a bit more varied? Maybe you also generally have a little too much at the high end and not much in the way of mids? Only small critisicms really, this track has a nice vibe otherwise and it's a pleasure to listen to :)
Thanks glad you enjoyed it. Good point with the hi hats. After listening to it again I see what you mean. A little too repetitive.

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