Bloodshøt - Oni (140bpm Dark Wobbles Baby!!!!)

[Bloodshøt]

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We got this new WIP here, we like my choice of synths a lot, and as we are taking a break for the day, it would be super cool if you dub experts would take a gander and tell us how you feel about it.

All comments welcome. Unless they're really mean, then keep them to yourself. (i'll cut you)

ROCK ONNN DUB FORUM! <3

p.s. - "Oni" is a Japanese word which can translate to mean "Demonic Spectre"

p.p.s. - track embed is BROKEN!!! click the link to take you to soundcloud. Thanks for dealing with the inconvenience, I can't seem to fix it!

p.p.p.s. TRACK EMBED IS FIXED. I'm a genius.

[Bass Institute]

Good start! I'm liking the sounds in this one.
I think the intro and transition into the drop needs some work to increase the tension and intensity.

Maybe change the (1,3) drum pattern leading into the drop for something else, or nothing at all, then incorporate the 1,3 on the drop.
The synths you have in the middle would work great on the intro too.

Keep it up, I would love to hear the finished result.

[Bloodshøt]

Thanks for the info! I should change that 1,3 kick snare it seems to always fly under my radar when it goes too long. I threw some revisions up, hope you like!

[zillion]

Tracks gone buddy!

[Bloodshøt]

Thanks for the heads up, I can't fix the embed, but if you click the link it works!

[Jez-R]

nice mix tho the snare sounds a little dry, maybe add a bit more reverb to it

[Bloodshøt]

Just spiced it up and swapped some things around, it is now in its prefinal state. I am going to sit on it for a bit and possibly send it off to be mastered, then my boy is going to drop some omar lynx style rap over it.