Alenko - D1

[cl3]

Im new to production done a few bits here and there but still got so much to learn ! this the First dubstep track that i have made its nothing special but looking for feedback on what I need to work on and what im doing right or wrong ! i will return all feedback !

Appreciate any advice a hell of alot ! everyone was in my position at some point.

Thanks

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[Velicious]

Where you looking to make a drop, or just transition into the verse? Because it sounds like you wanted to make a buildup, but it's way too short.

The wobble is pretty weak by itself. Seems like you wanted it to be the focal point of the song, but it delivers a light punch. Not sure what to specifically tell you, but I'd either look to layer the song more so that it doesn't rely on the bass alone to flow or strengthen the bad boy so it can make an impact.

Don't mind me here if I'm wrong, but you appear to constantly transition from a closed to open HH which doesn't sound too great.

You'll also want to make your tracks longer if you aren't looking to make an abrasive sound.

EDIT: Might I add, the piano sounds very tight; I think you did a very good job with that.

I know nothing, but hopefully you'll take something out of my post.

Cordially,

Velicious

[cl3]

Where you looking to make a drop, or just transition into the verse? Because it sounds like you wanted to make a buildup, but it's way too short.

The wobble is pretty weak by itself. Seems like you wanted it to be the focal point of the song, but it delivers a light punch. Not sure what to specifically tell you, but I'd either look to layer the song more so that it doesn't rely on the bass alone to flow or strengthen the bad boy so it can make an impact.

Don't mind me here if I'm wrong, but you appear to constantly transition from a closed to open HH which doesn't sound too great.

You'll also want to make your tracks longer
if you aren't looking to make an abrasive sound.
EDIT: Might I add, the piano sounds very tight; I think you did a very good job with that.

I know nothing, but hopefully you'll take something out of my post.

Cordially,

Velicious

First off thanks bro for the feedback I appreciate people taking the time to listeb and comment.

I wasnt going for a huge drop no I wanted the wobble bass to suddenly kick in tbh and to have the wobble stick out put not over power the tune my lack of mixing may have been a factor. And as for strength im completely new to dubstep and apart from a couple hip-hop tracks in the past to production as well. Atm im only using vsts built into fl studio I want to master that before trying massive etc apart from a few mixer plug ins ive got to boost the sound.

As for the hats ive been watching tutorials and have seen people do that but maybe I didnt pull it off properly or its just what you prefer.

anyway its back to the drawing board already working on something else its hard starting out because compared to most people im am rubbish ! And dont have alot of experience but with hard work and determination im gonna get there !