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rolfhunt
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feedback on my track

Post by rolfhunt » Thu Jan 09, 2014 10:54 pm

im looking for some critiquing on this track. the good the bad. (:
i know the main rhythm is repetitive i guess thats the obvious flaw. :h: Soundcloud
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Re: feedback on my track

Post by OfficialDAPT » Fri Jan 10, 2014 12:25 am

My suggestion would be to switch up the percussion, melody, bassline instrument, or really anything to make the song a little more interesting.
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Re: feedback on my track

Post by Moch » Sat Feb 15, 2014 9:06 pm

Nicely produced in my opinion, reminds me of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Vev-FEWD7Q
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Re: feedback on my track

Post by Volatil3 » Wed Feb 19, 2014 5:53 pm

I think the tune is a bit too repetitive, also the drop sounded quieter than the intro? maybe have a look at getting some bitcrusher and distortion FX to make add some grit to the drop and maybe make the intro quieter? Just my opinion
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Re: feedback on my track

Post by Bass Institute » Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:48 am

like people above have mentioned, it is repetitive, change up the drums a bit and add something diff with the melody.

keep working at it!
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