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Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Mindgate » Wed Mar 26, 2014 1:44 pm

It was quite a while since I tried to make anything dubstep(ish). But here it is, would really love some constructive criticism. :)

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by hirszu » Fri Mar 28, 2014 2:24 am

Love the atmosphere, this one flows really nice man. The kick sounds a bit flat to me however, could be better placed in the mix.

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Mindgate » Fri Mar 28, 2014 12:06 pm

To be honest I was skeptic about the kick too, gonna check it out what can I do about it. Thanks for the feedback mate :)

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by andyyhitscar » Fri Mar 28, 2014 4:52 pm

big tune here... lovin the syncopation

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by particle-jim » Fri Mar 28, 2014 4:53 pm

this is heavy as hell man, I'm really liking it a lot, I'm not too sure about the crackly distorted sounds just before the drop, also it sounds like it's distorting a little bit at around 1:20 and 1:35, other than that this is massive, I really like the hats in particular

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Mindgate
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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Mindgate » Fri Mar 28, 2014 8:12 pm

Merci mes amis, deffo gonna look into the distorting parts. Grateful for the feedback. :)

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by elyhess » Fri Mar 28, 2014 10:36 pm

fuck yeah deep as shit!

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Mindgate » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:09 pm

^^ thanks man

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Banesy » Sat Mar 29, 2014 2:54 am

That was cool. My favorite part of it is the sense of space and openness that you create but then turn around and have the sub-bass anchor everything down. You achieved this thin airy sound but then fill up everything with the massive bass. I don't like the claps though...they are really rough and crispy like gravel crunching under a footstep. I think they contrast too much with the silky smooth top end and are pretty distracting. That is just my preference though! Your art, your show. Nice work.

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by HighBodies » Sat Mar 29, 2014 4:46 am

Your synths are great here, I'm enjoying the indian-esque voices and instruments that really set the atmosphere, I want more of that!
It sounds like you could take it up another notch, like this could develop into a faster and more explosive melody that uses the kick and your main synth synced as you have them, but faster and without the "cool down" time between.

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Re: Mindgate - Kaherava

Post by Mindgate » Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:22 am

Didn't expect so much great feedback and constructive criticism. Thank you very much for getting me thinking and wanting to get better.

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