Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

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Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:13 am

Easy fellas, haven't posted a track in a while but here is one of my latest. Looking for any feedback ya wanna give!

Edit: The track wound up getting released as an exclusive free download on OneFortyDeep so if you want to grab a copy of it head over to their Soundcloud!

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by jaydot » Tue Apr 22, 2014 2:09 am

Says it's not available?
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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Tue Apr 22, 2014 2:18 am

Hm it's a private one so maybe you have to click the link and listen to it on Soundcloud instead of the embedded player, I wish they'd fix that.

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by jaydot » Tue Apr 22, 2014 2:39 am

Feelin the drop and the subline, mid range is nice.
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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by wehlfest » Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:29 am

nice deep tune. Maybe layer the snare with a few different percuss sounds or add some reverb. Needs some punch. Everything else is mint imo.
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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by TEKN » Tue Apr 22, 2014 7:18 am

Flows nice man love the bass line and the delayed mid sound. Nice spooky atmosphere. Only thing I can hear that I'd change is the snare could be a bit punchier but that's just personal preference. 2nd drop beat is killer. Big up man copped your bandcamp release after hearing a few tunes quality stuff!

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by Graydon » Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:01 pm

This is a really nice track, but like TEKN said, i'd punch that snare up a bit more!

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Tue Apr 22, 2014 3:23 pm

TEKN wrote:Flows nice man love the bass line and the delayed mid sound. Nice spooky atmosphere. Only thing I can hear that I'd change is the snare could be a bit punchier but that's just personal preference. 2nd drop beat is killer. Big up man copped your bandcamp release after hearing a few tunes quality stuff!
Big ups for copping the album on bandcamp! Glad you liked the beat on the second drop, wanted to mix it up a bit since having the same beat throughout a whole track can get stale.

Thanks for the feedback so far guys, glad you're feeling the tune overall. Seems like the overall consensus is that the snare lacks punch, I'll take a look at it :W:.

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by Tallen » Wed Apr 23, 2014 1:14 am

Pretty nice, man.

The snare needs a bit more snap and punch towards the 200 hz area.

Other than that, diggin' it!

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by Habits » Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:56 am

Hey man, nice tune, really like the pads and subs. I agree with other comments about the snare. Cool dark atmosphere going on. Like it.

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Re: Sovereign - In a Dark Place [Deep Dubstep]

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Tue May 27, 2014 3:06 pm

Easy, thought I'd update you all on the status of this track. I wound up tweaking it a bit more and the snare sounds a lot better now. The track's been put up as a OneFortyDeep Exclusive Free Download, so go check it out on there and grab the free download!

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