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Sessile93
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Sessile - keen (first Vocal work)

Post by Sessile93 » Wed Apr 23, 2014 10:25 pm

S'up lovely people,
First track I've used vocal on, let me know what you recon.
Much respect to all listeners.
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Re: Sessile - keen (first Vocal work)

Post by notoy » Thu Apr 24, 2014 10:27 pm

I like it, had me chillin out. I think the vocals actually take away from the rest of the song though. I'd like to hear it without them. Only other minor change I'd make is turning down the extra reverse snares in the second half of the song. Back-to-back they get a bit much. I like it though, nice job.

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Re: Sessile - keen (first Vocal work)

Post by DJoe » Thu Apr 24, 2014 10:31 pm

is that you yeah
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Re: Sessile - keen (first Vocal work)

Post by Sessile93 » Sun Apr 27, 2014 9:47 am

notoy wrote:I like it, had me chillin out. I think the vocals actually take away from the rest of the song though. I'd like to hear it without them. Only other minor change I'd make is turning down the extra reverse snares in the second half of the song. Back-to-back they get a bit much. I like it though, nice job.
Thanks man, might check it out without the vocal then. Just wanted to give working with vocals a try haven't done much of it before, maybe needs more work.
Yeh, wasn't sure what to do with the snares, thought about taking the high ends out for the last minute or so, and just having the reverse, almost prefer the reverse sound to the actual snare, but just change up for the last bit.
DJoe wrote:is that you yeah
Yeah man! Used to use Fl studio, and just changed over to Logic, finding it alot easier to use.

Thanks for the feedback fellas.

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