4 month dry spell over (Fatality- Hawbon)

[Hawbon]

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Still needing some work on the mixing and drumwork/ cleaning up but overall I feel its the best out of my others and I'm proud of it after not being able to make anything in forever. Thanks for listening fellas!

[Lye_Form]

I wouldn't worry much about mixing, most of the quality of electronic music comes from composition (drums need more work though try using more organic sounding samples- start with 808s/909s, and bin vengeance), final mixing is mostly important for when your wanting to release something. You definitely have some cool ideas in there, but all jumbled together and no structure so hard to enjoy. pretty original too (that i can tell) so big up there.

your bass that comes in for some reason reminded me of L-Vis 1990 - Ballad 4D, check it out as i think you may benefit from seeing how often less is more with sound design/melody (bassline is all over the place in yours) and arrangement is everything.

best of luck & keep at is, 4 months is a long time to not finish a tune, try to finish everything even if you hate it all during spells like that, things tend to fall back in place that way.