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Ghostball
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PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by Ghostball » Sat May 24, 2014 4:42 pm

I posted my first dubstep song i created. I was wondering fi you guys could review it and give me some feedback or suggestions. Also which drop is the weakest or the strongest? Do the tempo shifts work or are they too awkward? I made this using Logic Pro X and only the synthesizers inside or it, no third party VSTs. Sorry for caps in title btw. https://soundcloud.com/powax/when-ghosts-attack-demo
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jrkhnds
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by jrkhnds » Sat May 24, 2014 7:44 pm

try again.

some inspiration:
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kudos
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by kudos » Tue May 27, 2014 7:58 pm

Try again man.
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Ghostball
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by Ghostball » Tue May 27, 2014 11:30 pm

That's the super old version.
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emook
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by emook » Wed May 28, 2014 4:59 am

you posted it 3 days ago so it can't be an "old version". you chopped up a lot of songs/samples in parts so its obvious what is original and not. but i'd say to at least add drums. i can't hear any....(krk rocket 8 )
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Ghostball
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW FIRST SONG

Post by Ghostball » Wed May 28, 2014 5:12 am

I made all those parts from scratch, and the only samples are the drums and impacts. Anyway it is choppy and the drums are drowned out.
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