060314 (deep dubstep, suggestions/comments wanted)

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060314 (deep dubstep, suggestions/comments wanted)

Post by sobie » Fri Jun 06, 2014 4:04 am

New bit I'm working on just went through the first mix down, gotta test it out some more on different systems but wanted to share it on the forum.


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Re: 060314 (deep dubstep, suggestions/comments wanted)

Post by wub » Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:43 pm

Intro is maybe twice as long as it needs to be before the drums hit. Like the shuffly beat when it kicks in, felt the sub could do with a bit more movement at times. Some of the hat samples sound a bit too static and might benefit from loosening a little in their placement.

After 2m45s the tune just sounds like it's repeating itself, would suggest either switching up the programming of what you've got or else bringing in some new elements to keep things sounding fresh towards the back end of the tune.

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Re: 060314 (deep dubstep, suggestions/comments wanted)

Post by sobie » Fri Jun 06, 2014 3:18 pm

thanks wub! appericate the comments, will work them in on a new edit.

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Re: 060314 (deep dubstep, suggestions/comments wanted)

Post by Covant » Tue Jun 10, 2014 4:46 am

I'd have to pretty much agree with everything wub said. I feel like the kick needs a little bit more presence, it's a bit quiet atm and gets lost in the mix a little bit. That said, I like that hats and percussion alot

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