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Cavemanfunk
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by Cavemanfunk » Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:05 pm
Soundcloud
Started off trying to get a Commodo style synth, ended up with something a bit more metallic. First time i've ever finished a tune in a couple of hours, rather than wasting a whole lot of time just warping together atmospheres and trying to set the stage. Had 2 weeks off in bed with GTAV and started to feel sluggish, glad i managed to pull myself out of that hole in the abyss.
feedback? Thoughts??
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rockonin
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by rockonin » Fri Jun 20, 2014 2:44 pm
Work on the transitions.You need to add a different bass or instrument, and cut out the main bass out in some places. It sounds the same throughout.
You need to sort the kick out in the mix. Maybe high pass the main bass a little further to give the kick some room in the mix. Also maybe use a transient shaper for the kick for some more attack and oomph.
The snare/clap also needs a little more body to the sound. Not bad for a couple of hours work though.
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