new dubstep track

[deegan]

hi i really like making music im like addicted to it could you tell me what you think of this track i made https://soundcloud.com/d33gan/dubstep btw im 11 yrs old so if it not as good as proffesional adults music thats why

[budjunky]

Hi, for an 11 year old kid it sounds great, try to make a real track from it,
make some variations, breaks.

With what programm do you make your musik ? Do you use sample & loops or plugins to
make the sounds.

Put some delay effekts on the sounds...because this effekts came from dub and dubstep is a modern club form of dub ...
make a sub bass (filtered to about 40 hz) under your bassline...
(your track sounds a bit like a mixture of skrillex and trap musik and not dubstep, yes skrillex is not dubstep)
listen to some "deep medi" tracks or dmz, or something like that some real dubstep...
search for deep medi or dmz on youtube ...
watch the doku "dub echoes" on youtube it will explain everything about the dub production form
and why dubstep is a modern form of dub and not something like skrillex ...

and than after all you could try to seperate the frequencies, hihats and other high sounds dont need lower frequencies, lower sounds don't need so much high frequencies etc. if you have the whole frequency range on all sounds they will not fit together, because you have only some space for frequencies more sounds on the same frequency will produce muddy sound.

And never forget you are very talented so keep going ....

The only negative i had to say is that sample "bass" i don't like it because its an often used 80s sample..and you used it a bit to often in the track, its a bit nerving but thats only my opinion ...

[dickman69]

get rid of that bass sample

needs more subbass

[Think_Dubstep]

keep working on those bass patches! =D