Obsologic - Aliens (140)

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obsologic
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Obsologic - Aliens (140)

Post by obsologic » Sat Sep 27, 2014 5:13 am

https://soundcloud.com/obsologic/obsologic-aliens-1

Feedback? Im new here Im not sure what the appropriate way to submit is but here :6:

Darkowl
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Re: Obsologic - Aliens (140)

Post by Darkowl » Sun Sep 28, 2014 12:55 am

(French with bad English here)
Wow, what's a song :p Love it ! For me it's like some juice of watermelon dancing with the drum !
Which vst did you use for this AlienJuice song ?

RIG-RAG
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Re: Obsologic - Aliens (140)

Post by RIG-RAG » Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:33 pm

The drums in the intro seem to loud, maybe try using a filter to bring them in slowly.
Personally i would low pass your mid bass sounds, just enough to let your highs breath a bit.
Pretty tight track.
I was permitted to hear an incredible music ... i heard the gestation of the new world... the sound of stars grinding and chafing , of fountains clotted with blazing gems... music is planetary fire, an irreducible which is all sufficient it is the slate-writing of the gods.
- Henry miller , tropic of cancer

GregLongman
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Re: Obsologic - Aliens (140)

Post by GregLongman » Tue Sep 30, 2014 2:39 pm

Props for the artwork on SoundCloud first of all :lol:

The phrasing and sound design in the drop is so good. Resonance and rhythm of that midrange is fun but crushing.

I would like to hear those guitar parts just after the drop a bit higher in the mix, it feels quite empty with them that low. The intro drums are a tad too big in the mix, which is what makes them harsh but don't get me wrong, they work. I would slightly take out some of the mids around 250-600Hz on the kick. That will just let the kick pop without so much thump.

I really like the song, some cracking ideas in there.

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