Jez-R - Improvising

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Jez-R
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Jez-R - Improvising

Post by Jez-R » Fri Oct 03, 2014 8:34 am

Looking for some feedback on my new track,
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Let me know what you think, Cheers.
A Track of mine you may like to hear
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Re: Jez-R - Improvising

Post by ChrisPlatow » Fri Oct 03, 2014 4:51 pm

You can tell its improvised. Its pretty repetitive.

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Re: Jez-R - Improvising

Post by Jez-R » Mon Oct 06, 2014 8:59 am

Fair comment, il be honest this was produced over night but i felt chuffed writing it that quick and thought keep it minimal. Could always go back and change up a few things. Thanks for you feedback :)
A Track of mine you may like to hear
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Re: Jez-R - Improvising

Post by ChrisPlatow » Mon Oct 06, 2014 7:14 pm

I like the song and the vibe. I just think that bass gets old after awhile. Also that kick seems to me like it could be just a little more pronounced. It may need a bit of gain or saturation but it sounds a little thin so i think maybe another kick layered on top and eq'd would do the trick. also those chords at around 2:22 could be a little more upfront in the mix. Thats just my opinion tho. My last comment was very constructive my bad, I just reviewed like twenty songs on here so I guess i was getting lazy. Hopefully this one helps a little more.

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