Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

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GregLongman
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Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

Post by GregLongman » Fri Oct 03, 2014 2:32 pm

Hey guys :t:

Here's a piece of chill out/future ish that I finished up today. I wanted to make a track about Aliens and shit, and this is what it turned out like :lol:

Hope you all enjoy it, let me know what you think.

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Re: Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

Post by ChrisPlatow » Fri Oct 03, 2014 5:01 pm

I feels it. Sounds like alien shits. I got nothing constructive to add lol i like the song. It didnt blow me away but i like the vibe

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Re: Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

Post by GregLongman » Sun Oct 05, 2014 9:07 pm

ChrisPlatow wrote:I feels it. Sounds like alien shits. I got nothing constructive to add lol i like the song. It didnt blow me away but i like the vibe
Thanks man, much appreciated. This track is obviously not mastered, so don't let the loudness (quietness) put you off.

Can anyone offer any other feedback? :)

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Re: Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

Post by particle-jim » Mon Oct 06, 2014 1:12 pm

some of the ideas are quite nice and the sub is good but I don't think the drums do the track justice, I'd maybe look for more raw and organic sounding drum samples, particularly the snare needs changing imo, other than the drums not being to my liking your sound design and melodies are nice though :)
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Re: Lightyears - Thousand Giants (Future/140)

Post by jaydot » Sat Oct 11, 2014 8:09 am

I agree with Jim maybe switch up the snare to a rim shot-first drop could be longer imo-sub is really nice and that pitch bent synth is really sweet.
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