g.don - Sour [Dubstep / WIP]

Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Fri Oct 10, 2014 6:56 am

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Lookin for feedback!

Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Sat Oct 11, 2014 2:58 am

test_recordings · Post by **test_recordings** » Sun Oct 12, 2014 5:11 am

It's nice but I can't really feel the bass. Everyting else is pretty good though, maybe switch up the wobbly synth as it goes along with different harmonies to make it interesting and pan it around. The track is kind of hypnotic so maybe make everything slowly warp out over time with phase and echo as a kind of anti-drop where everything gets really intense just to get it to go back to normal - like relief from the craziness.

Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Sun Oct 12, 2014 1:29 pm

test_recordings wrote:It's nice but I can't really feel the bass. Everyting else is pretty good though, maybe switch up the wobbly synth as it goes along with different harmonies to make it interesting and pan it around. The track is kind of hypnotic so maybe make everything slowly warp out over time with phase and echo as a kind of anti-drop where everything gets really intense just to get it to go back to normal - like relief from the craziness.

This is actually a crazy good idea, huge thank you man!

I'll post a new variation when I get some time!

crackpot · Post by **crackpot** » Sun Oct 12, 2014 4:37 pm

nice, sounds like some of the stuff i used to listen to. i would play with the speed of the lfo a bit though

hirszu · Post by **hirszu** » Sun Oct 12, 2014 6:04 pm

No remarks from me, I really like the tune. I'm listening on my headphones and the bass is there. Of course a little variation is always nice

Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Mon Oct 13, 2014 6:20 pm

Here is a temporary upload of the idea that test_recordings gave me..

Tell me if I should build on this or revert it back to the way it was with more variations

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Edit, here is another variation that I like much more :

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Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Wed Oct 15, 2014 12:05 pm

bump^

Graydon · Post by **Graydon** » Thu Oct 16, 2014 12:07 pm

bump, still lookin for feedback on the 2 variations i posted above!

test_recordings · Post by **test_recordings** » Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:45 am

Yes, the v2 has it. I would try make it even more intense, like Scratch Perry-style out of your mind. Just imagine it playing out on a system in a room while you're mashed, even making it descend in to static and warbling bleeps

This King Tubby track has some of the stuff I'm talking about, not really crazy though

You can just pm me too if you want feedback you know, I like your stuff

Singula · Post by **Singula** » Mon Oct 20, 2014 12:14 pm

Like it. Would like to hear the finished version. I like version 2 of the 2 edits the most. Nice panning in there.

Followed you on sc, as I want to hear the finished version when it's done.

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