unfinished but any thoughts about it?

[Ema_geodiV]

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[Riddles]

not my kinda thing in general to be honest but with that said, it sounds fine, percussion is clear and the tune doesnt sound badly mixed down, nothing sounds muddy. If anything you could do with probably introduce the synth in the bridge somewhere in the tune so they don't come out of nowhere. also the intro isn't much of an intro either, but not exactly an issue.

[Ema_geodiV]

not my kinda thing in general to be honest but with that said, it sounds fine, percussion is clear and the tune doesnt sound badly mixed down, nothing sounds muddy

Glad to hear those are my main probs whenever I'm making a tune. You may not like it but hey at least your opinion speaks the truth! Btw the song is actually my remix from beatport play. A friend of mine challenged me to make it sound like a tune from a main menu screen in a game... I think I made a terrible job at it though

If anything you could do with probably introduce the synth in the bridge somewhere in the tune so they don't come out of nowhere.

I'm bad at introducing synths >.< I need to practice. thanks for pointing it out

[Ecliptual]

Positives:
- Good variety of sounds used
- Decent mix down
- Levels seem to be on point (gain)
- Original little arp pattern
- Drums sit nicely in the mix

Negatives:
- No real arrangement to the main bass pattern
- No build up or crossover, could really use something to give the track direction
- Bass sounds could do with abit of mastering

Great work and keep on working at it
I hope this helps
Best regards,
Ecliptual

[Ema_geodiV]

Positives:
- Good variety of sounds used
- Decent mix down
- Levels seem to be on point (gain)
- Original little arp pattern
- Drums sit nicely in the mix

Negatives:
- No real arrangement to the main bass pattern
- No build up or crossover, could really use something to give the track direction
- Bass sounds could do with abit of mastering

Great work and keep on working at it
I hope this helps
Best regards,
Ecliptual

thanks for the feedback

[CRoW_Dubstep123]

definitely different, kinda breakbeat vibes, the mix could use a little work, but still a nice track.