g.don - Jah Dreamin' (Dubstep / Deep)

[Graydon]

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Got some time to breath during the holidays (funny that), so here's the finished version of "Unititled" I renamed purely because of the RasKitchen sample i found rummaging through my old hdd.

Feedback and tips appreciated.

I feel like the bass could be turned down a touch, but I'll let you guys be the judge of that.
I also wanted to put in a melody in there but I couldn't really think of a good instrument to toy with.

Edit:

Added a layered electric guitar melody to the second and last part of the drop, tell me watcha thinkin'!

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[Sarbenfreude]

this is heavy but youre right needs something melodic.. some disgustingly crunchy, moody electric guitar riffs would sound baaaad on this one.

nice effort overall tho

[Redoken]

Not bad at all but you need to add something to let it be interesting.
That's just a sub try with some arps or lead.

[dougriley]

Awesome man. Love the bass line. I think the groove is there tbh. I would try to add some mid texture to your low end though. Something that could evolve throughout the tune.

[Graydon]

Thanks guys, this is the feedback i'm lookin for! Will go back to work on this one as practice in a bit!

Cheers!

[Graydon]

Update, here is a the new version of the track with a melody to accompany the bass.

It comes in after the first bridge, and progresses for the final drop in the tune.

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[Graydon]

bump!

[Samual]

You're getting closer!! it still feels like theres something missing though. Bring out the high synth more while mastering and maybe at a second higher end synth to compliment the one you already have. It just needs more of a melody.