Eloy Santiago-Merchants In The Shrubs-Dub

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nebula_nova
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Eloy Santiago-Merchants In The Shrubs-Dub

Post by nebula_nova » Wed Nov 05, 2014 2:30 pm

going for a somewhat traditional vibe this time- still first take, so probably not the last..
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BLINDR
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Re: Eloy Santiago-Merchants In The Shrubs-Dub

Post by BLINDR » Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:48 pm

Yo I think you might have too many elements in this track man its hard to catch the beat for me,
and there are some harsh frequencies in there the main thing i heard was the xylophone bell thing on and around the upbeat. Check out this thing on subtractive EQ to get rid of some of the harshnesshttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0e8xT-1cS1o
keep at it tho i think it might have a cool groove if you take out some elements on the rhythmic side, try to add some atmospheric stuff, peace mang
Yo if you got a soundcloud, mixcloud, or whatever comment or message me a link if your makin tunes id check them out for sure just shoot the link.. keep it about the music . keep your health and Jah bless peace.

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nebula_nova
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Re: Eloy Santiago-Merchants In The Shrubs-Dub

Post by nebula_nova » Tue Dec 30, 2014 2:06 pm

hey, thanks for answering! just did a remix and tried to use your advice- put the harsh noise in the background and stuff..im just not good at thowing stuff away..
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Sarbenfreude
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Re: Eloy Santiago-Merchants In The Shrubs-Dub

Post by Sarbenfreude » Tue Dec 30, 2014 3:03 pm

theres a lot of clashing frequencies in this one
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