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Stikman - Pardoner

Post by stikman » Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:17 pm

New track after a few months off!

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Hope you like

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Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Post by Fastworker » Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:24 pm

I would but a compressor on the speech from this dark soul caracter and work on the phaser so it variate a bit, and maybe cut some reverb of osward as well

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Post by stikman » Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:36 pm

Fastworker wrote:I would but a compressor on the speech from this dark soul caracter and work on the phaser so it variate a bit, and maybe cut some reverb of osward as well

I was struggling big time with the vocal. It was either too flat or too much. Which was driving me bonkers as the wav rip had zero background noise. Ta for the feedback son :Q:

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Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Post by Redoken » Sun Jan 11, 2015 5:42 pm

This track has nice ambiance but where's the drop?!

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Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Post by Soze » Mon Jan 12, 2015 12:26 am

This is interesting. You need a sub to follow that lead sound, with a bit of LFO to give it movement. Also id say you need to layer up your drums as they sound flat atm.

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Post by stikman » Mon Jan 12, 2015 9:43 am

Soze wrote:This is interesting. You need a sub to follow that lead sound, with a bit of LFO to give it movement. Also id say you need to layer up your drums as they sound flat atm.

Yeah man I thought that after listening to it back a few times. I thought it might get too messy in adding in more sub bass. Oh well maybe next time! Thanks for the feedback much appreciated

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Post by stikman » Mon Jan 12, 2015 9:45 am

Redoken wrote:This track has nice ambiance but where's the drop?!

Haha near the end it goes a bit more grimey if that's what your after! Thanks for listening man

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Re: Stikman - Pardoner

Post by foxox » Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:23 pm

stikman wrote:New track after a few months off!

Soundcloud

Hope you like

Safe
I like the sounds you have but I think you need more going on over the whole track, especially with the drums.

I think a lot of electric musicians tend to get into this a sort of "tunnel vision" with one pattern after the next, including myself. Try to add more to it that isn't part of a pattern necessarily but just in it's own little spot.

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