g.don - The Line - [Deep / Dubstep]

[Graydon]

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Lookin' for feedback and such.

Bit of a name change too, g.don roles off the tongue a bit better.

Finished Track, also posted below.

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[KosmonautOfficial]

awesome preview man The track sounds rich and eqed well. The only thing I would change is the amount of variation in your track with the drums and maybe add some variation with a different melody. Other than that great work and your off to a good start Take care man

[test_recordings]

It's alright, does need a bit of variation though. Maybe some dubbed up piano, not riffing or anything, just playing a little melody so you could sample some classical stuff. It's actually quite easy to find tracks in the same key because composers would explicitly put it in the title like "Prelude in E Minor" by Chopin or whatever. Trumpet, even maybe sax too, could work.

For some reason I thought of the "Funeral March" by Chopin while I was listening to your track so here it is for you to see what you think

[lucki_vibrato]

Hmm, I like it, I think it just needs some variation, as the others said here

[Beekah]

Nice. Good work on those dark pads and strings. Like others have said, some more variation would be good.

[Graydon]

Thanks for the feedback fam, really appreciate it!

Here's the finished product. Added a bunch of small edits and variation to the drums and effects. More feedback is always needed! Attempted to make a small instrument melody to go along with the pads, but I couldn't get something that I was comfortable with. Maybe I'll revisit for a vip

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[Beekah]

Very nice man! Could I get a 320? ^^

[Graydon]

Very nice man! Could I get a 320? ^^

Forsure, I'll send ya a message!

[Walrustown]

Great production mate, solid atmosphere and tight perc/bass - get rid of those snares in the intro and maybe one kick off the end of the kick-roll into the second half of the first drop, other than that its solid as a rock

[Graydon]

Thanks for the feedback, Idk I kinda like the hollowed snare in the intro, i guess its just my preference though.

Also bump.

[sovex]

Very nice...

[particle-jim]

this is absolutely rock solid, can I get a copy please?