2nd Attempt

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Wed Apr 12, 2006 5:51 pm

hello,

This is my 2nd tune i've been working on. I posted a tune on here a couple of weeks ago but wasn't getting anywhere with it. I've now started this tune which is pretty different from my first and is the first time i've made a beat with only single hits. It would be great to have some feedback before I carry on, any advice would be appreciated.

Tune can be found here: http://www.dubstepforum.com/tunes/dubio ... nished.mp3

8bitwonder · Post by **8bitwonder** » Wed Apr 12, 2006 6:11 pm

i might not know what im on about here but if i say its too wide does that makes sense?

i like it a lot

bring the mix to the middle a bit i think

good track tho mate

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:43 am

bumpedywump

etch · Post by **etch** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:03 am

drums sound good mate. i thought maybe your bass was too busy, and not subby enough?

ramadanman · Post by **ramadanman** » Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:58 am

catchy melody line

kick needs to be tighter and louder in the mix.

i like your snare sound, it's crisp. use of reversed hits is quite effective.

bass reminds me of that d1 dub at the start of dubstep warz. perhaps at say 1.22 bring in some variations - ie the bass dropping out ah yeh like 1.38 or so. more of that is cool - it creates excitement, variation, interest.

not too bad, sub could be a bit louder though.

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Mon Apr 17, 2006 5:40 pm

thanks very much for replies and advice. I'll be working on this for the next week or two.

2nd Attempt

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