listened to your dubs production seems pretty tite jus a little repetative IMHO.
maybe use a sine to phatten out the b-line a bit, not sure about the wobble, sound a bit out of pitch at times, unless thats how its supposed to be lol
push up or maybe even layer up the snare with another.
dont mean to be harsh bruv, not like im benga or nuttin, just wot i think anyways peace out brudder
