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Vadarfone. Straight Line

Post by vadarfone » Tue Jan 22, 2008 1:37 pm

Incomplete, but the basics are there.

Made this in the time I got home from work and now!

Let me know what you think... I reckon the structure needs work more than anything, so let me know.

The intro is a bit rushed, so it is not as good as the other ones I have posted, but it will be...

I want to add another motif, but i am not sure what will work.. Suggestions please!!

Comments get comments!

Noice.


>>>> WORKED ON THE TRACK TODAY!!

NEW FILE!

Download is here...

Straight Line <<<Here!
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Post by vadarfone » Tue Jan 22, 2008 2:51 pm

How much do I have to A/B my tunes with the Dubstep popstars to get a comment round here!?

:lol: :P

If anything, I think there is too much bass in this track... How does that suit you, bass-heads!!

:D

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Post by bowser » Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:05 pm

boooaaahhhhhh :o

wicked subkick!!!

i like the intro very much!

i think maybe it's a bit too much sub :lol: :wink:

very cool minimal style altough! i like it! very subliminal

but i think one of the snares starts too early

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Post by vadarfone » Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:14 pm

Ah yeah I messed with the snare position loads.

Its not meant to be in dnb style time.

Its a Garage joint for nasty fuckers.

And yeah.. way too much sub. Headphone mixdown again!

:)

Cant get monitors in my house in Japan god damn it.

:evil:

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Post by nick z » Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:06 pm

Would you mind sending us a stream or mp3? Cheers. Z

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Post by vadarfone » Wed Jan 23, 2008 3:37 am

yeah mate. link not working for you?

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Post by triss » Fri Jan 25, 2008 12:45 am

fucking amazing intro again. vocals are lovely everything builds smoothly with a real sense of something emerging as the track unfolds.

You've some how kept it really interesting even though you've used very few component however the track does dull towards the end, loses that sense of of things 'emerging' (:3:) . you could do with an extra element somewhere to brighten things up.

the bass is outrageous again.

nice one.

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Post by misk » Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:55 am

nice one! looking forward to more from the renoise crew!

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Post by vadarfone » Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:37 am

Ah cheers lads. :D

Yeah, I need to add more to this track to take it up a level in the second movement. Ill add something rad and upload it later. Nice one.

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Post by vadarfone » Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:25 am

I worked on the track some more.

Click the link in the first post for the updated version!!

:)

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Post by vadarfone » Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:18 pm

Yo, if anyone wants to mix this track down in a fairly neutral room, with decent monitoring and wants to A/B it on the way, I will pay them.

I got a deal on this, and need a mix down.

Any takers?

PM me if you can do this. Cheers

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Post by horse » Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:22 pm

this track is a monster - really into this one. the intro is fucking awesome!!

i agree with previous comments that it needs a l'il touch more towards the end.
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