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intoccabile
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INTOCCABILE - SUCCUBUS

Post by intoccabile » Thu May 18, 2006 5:38 am

It's a ladies tune ! Moody and sensual ! Gyaldem skank to this oi oi

It's called succubus... not the full tune.... and it's an early mixdown

Plz tell me how I can make it sound better

Check it !

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... DB02B50A67

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Post by shonky » Thu May 18, 2006 7:40 am

Best way to make it better - finish it. Sounds really clear, nice to hear something that's not half-step, good bounce to this, the tablas sound busy but they add energy rather than clutter as it's not in half-time. Edits are good, keeps your interest and doesn't just go for the repetition and headnodding vibe, think this'd work well in a club (not just a dubstep club).

Maybe dirty the bass and beats up a bit as it sounds a bit too clinical, but apart from that sounds really good. Oh, and not too sure about the "real" drum fill, seemed a bit forced and out of place
Hmm....

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Post by intoccabile » Thu May 18, 2006 5:42 pm

Awesome feedback

Thank youuuuuuuuuuu =D
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Post by shonky » Thu May 18, 2006 8:04 pm

No biggy, gonna bump this one as I think more peeps should here it.
Hmm....

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Post by robotic » Sat May 20, 2006 2:23 pm

great tune, wicked production on drums and percs, very crisp sound overall, possibly a bit too clean and not enough.... dirt/grime/street for some of da headz. :wink:

also the bline sounds great, but could use some variation (more diff. parts). i was also expecting a big lead bass drop or something after the quiet part @ 2:17 or so... might be nice. the acoustic drumfill could deffo use some distortion or aggro tube compression or some such... :twisted:

great work, can't wait to hear the finished track.

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Post by 8bitwonder » Sat May 20, 2006 2:31 pm

shonky passed me this last night-ill pm you :wink:

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Post by kane-testrack » Sun May 21, 2006 4:06 pm

sweet tune! agree the bass needs to be a bit dirtier / louder. maybe put it on the sidechain of the main compressor to punch it out a bit when yr mastering? (if you on reason 3) worth a try... might be talking shit though ;-)

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