Looking for some critique on a tune im workin on.

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Looking for some critique on a tune im workin on.

Post by theverdict » Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:16 pm

Its called "Souf"
1st song on my myspace page.

www.myspace.com/controlledmethods


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Post by shonky » Thu Jun 22, 2006 10:16 pm

Like the pads, they got an unsettling feel to them, the rhythms really good, but I think the mid-rangey bass comes in a bit too loud and overpowers the rest of the mix, good though, liking it
Hmm....

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Post by narcossist » Thu Jun 22, 2006 10:22 pm

Well feelin the ambient stuff you've got on there man.

Reckon the tune your asking about is full of dope bits but just a little bit progressive. Bass doesn't sit to well when it drops either, but there are alot of cool sounding bits and the track sounds like its got a lot of potential if you switch things about a bit.

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Post by theverdict » Fri Jun 23, 2006 12:17 am

Thanks for the looking out.
Yea its still in the works.

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Post by theverdict » Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:28 pm

damn 44 views and only 2 comments.
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Post by pk- » Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:49 pm

quite like the intro, but maybe a bit more varation in the percussion or something? the bass sounds a little overdistorted too.

i can't really offer much advice, production sounds tight though :]

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Post by theverdict » Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:55 pm

Thanx man.
Ill have a new edit up soon.

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Post by pk- » Fri Jun 23, 2006 10:20 pm

i was clutching at straws to find something to suggest there though, it all sounds good

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Post by theverdict » Sat Jun 24, 2006 2:37 am

I think it has more grime sound.

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Post by theverdict » Thu Jun 29, 2006 1:46 am

theVerdict wrote:I think it has more grime sound.
maybe

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