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eskay
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Comments for a virgin producer

Post by eskay » Sat Jul 15, 2006 10:20 pm

After listening to all kinds of dance music for years, dubstep has inspired me to make a tune of my own.

It is still a bit rough around the edges, but I would welcome any comments about the tune (and how it can be improved).

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZE9BCF9K

Cheers

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Post by marsyas » Sun Jul 16, 2006 1:30 am

bass dood bass !!!

i hear no bass whatsoever.
the samples cool, the drums are a bit dry.

sounds real rough, but keep on it !!

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Post by eskay » Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:38 am

That's strange - I can hear the sub on my headphones, I will take a look.

Thanks for the comments.

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Post by shonky » Sun Jul 16, 2006 11:57 am

Errr...megaupload ain't havin it. Could you use YouSendIt and I'll give it a listen. Generally less advertising, less wait, and less bollocky little download limit bizniz.
Hmm....

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Post by composite_human » Sun Jul 16, 2006 3:23 pm

if it's under 10 mb, up it to www.tindeck.com - no download limitations
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Post by eskay » Sun Jul 16, 2006 3:50 pm

Done, new link here:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... F16215E682

Thanks for your time.

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Post by marsyas » Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:14 pm

eskay wrote:That's strange - I can hear the sub on my headphones, I will take a look.

Thanks for the comments.
i dunno, if there was bass trust me i could both hear and feel it.
my setup right now is pretty large...

anyways, all i hear is a kick -- no bass on my end.
could be how its mixed though ! :)

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Post by shonky » Sun Jul 16, 2006 8:43 pm

I like the progression and the spoken vocals behind it. The beat reminds me of a classic old hip-hop beat, seems familiar in a way, but I likes it. Think the strings seem way too prominent though.

But thez no bass. You might be mixing on pc monitors, but I cain't hear nuttin.

Think it's a good start, it's got an ambiguous mood to it which bodes well for things to come.
Hmm....

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Post by eskay » Mon Jul 17, 2006 5:52 am

Thanks Shonky.

I will get to work on the bass and strings.

Take it easy

eskay

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