new tune from greenseed *update05/08* industrial bizness

[greenseed]

still in sequencing/effects stage but i thhought id see whatb u folks thought so
far as im likin it alot

2nd in myspunk player with a few tweeks

thx dsf heads

[andichrist]

nice. I'd like to hear a full version. also, I'd play around with the chorus chords, try some effects on them.

[chewie]

Yeah man different steez, digging it. Would like to hear once its finished. On a production tip the kit doesn't seem coherent enough if you get me. The snare has a nice deep reverb on it but the hats seem a bit dry maybe run a second milder reverb bus on both hats and snare and see what that sound like. The end of the bar at about 47 seconds seems to go quieter is that due to the compression or am i just caned and imagining things? Who knows anyway big ups man. Hit us up when your done.

[greenseed]

thx guys... will try the things u speak of
checked out both ur tunes aswell...killer shit!

andi- that tune u folks are workin on gunna be/is sick

chew- really likin all of urs..esp yes man!

[greenseed]

bumppp

[andichrist]

Sounds a lot more interesting over all. good work.

I for one, am still having problems with that vocal chord, what you've done with it is definitely an improvement, I'm just not sure it works well with the overall industrial landscape you're building up with the rest of the tune.

Maybe save that version to go back to it later, and experiment using different sounds for that chord? I would try something less organic and more technologic, sinister...

edit: thanks for the props! really glad you like it.

[greenseed]

ok i will try that andi..................thx alot for listening and the constructive crit!...............