new track, industrial sounding, wip

[hubsmoke]

hey all, i'm new here.

i started trying to make dubstep a week ago and i'd really appreciate any feedback you all have.

my new work in progress is called "withered and dry", i just upped it on my myspace, only the first 1:30 have bass, the rest is just the drum track on loop. i don't even know if it's dubstep haha, but i'll go with it, cuz dubstep sounds cool.

there's a lot that i'm going to improve on this track, like having more varied drums, adjusting the levels, and perhaps tweaking the filters on the verrry high bass, cuz it's kind of loud, but it's different (i guess?), which is why i like it

my myspace is a collection of unfinished ideas/experiments, check em!

http://www.myspace.com/hubsmoke

let me know what you think, thanks!

-hubsmoke

[droid sector]

mixdown needs work, but i like the sounds you used.

nice one

[clarkfader]

hi mate , nice idea but not going anyware im afraid , and the levels seem to be all over the place , fighting 4 space cause the bass is overpowering the rest of the track , but all that comes with learning , as they r mistakes i`ve made in the past !!!!!! make sure u got all the levels on your sound system right cause that could set u back !!!!!!

like that kuddle tune thou , has promise !!!!

[hubsmoke]

thanks for your comments, i'm just starting to learn about EQ and compression, i messed around a little bit and uploaded a new mix of the track, hopefully it's a little better

thanks for listening