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New Tune for your review!

Post by fubar » Mon Nov 21, 2005 11:20 pm

Alright everyone, just finished this one today and any feedback on the style/arrangement general production, things you like/dont like etc. would be much appreciated :).
not strictly dubstep this one, more on the dub side of things maybe but have a listen and tell us what you think, cheers!

link -> http://d54.yousendit.com/E/2CS8AHRXXLKU ... Ernest.mp3
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http://s54.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2CS8 ... EX1EJ86TUX
^this expires in a few days but ill get a permenant upload link in a bit

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Post by andythetwig » Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:24 pm

I think it's brilliant! There really isn't much I would change about it!

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Post by fubar » Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:13 pm

Cheers for having a listen andy glad you like!

Heres the link for my acid planet upload when the one above runs out again all negative/positive feedback is very welcome, cheers

Edit look at the bottom for an update, cheers!
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Post by secretagentgel » Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:58 pm

nice, man. chill dub vibe. love the guitar. :) personal things i'd change - drop the hihats by a few db, at least when other things come in. and i'd like to hear more drop outs - more dynamics - and more variations. feels like a lot of the parts just loop. sounds okay, but starts to lose my interest.

but those are little things. nothing bad about the track for sure.

corey

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Post by fubar » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:26 pm

bump, sorry, :roll: any reckon this is something worth working some more on? what parts i should keep etc. im going to change the bass sound and have already made the ending a bit more interesting (may reupload later) but any more ideas/feedback would be nice. Cheers!

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Post by r33lc4sh » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:35 pm

fubar ideas should be your
do what u wanna do untill u are satified - that's most important
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Post by fubar » Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:28 pm

yea man not really talking about musical ideas though more ideas on the general production of the track in a more technical sense, its pretty helpful getting a fresh set of ears sometimes.

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Post by osiris » Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:44 pm

yes definately feeling this, big tune.. sorry no further comment.

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Post by osiris » Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:47 pm

ur definately on to something, but y post in someone else's thread?

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Post by j_j » Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:03 pm

yeah bit cheeky innit, :lol:

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Post by kymatik » Sun Nov 27, 2005 9:45 pm

Really like the feel and vibe of this track, deeeeep :)

I don't know the technical terms :oops: but the overall mix ain't quite right imo, agree the hi hats are too overbearing, they totally dominate the percussion about 3.30 in, and I'd like more 'dirt' to the overall sound. good work tho 8)

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Post by fubar » Tue Nov 29, 2005 4:44 pm

Ok Everyone, cheers for having a listen, feedback was very helpful, Ive got another version of the first track avaialble, I think ive tidied it up a fair bit and ive added a few more tings, and theres another track for your feedback aswell, hope you like :)

Ernest MP3 -> http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Ernestmp3.mp3
Ernest - Wav -> http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Ernest.wav

&

Ta Kinar MP3-> http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Ta%20Kinar_mp3.mp3
Ta Kinar Wav-> http://rasclatt.image-upload.org/Ta%20Kinar.wav

Cheers! :D

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Post by andythetwig » Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:01 pm

ernest- awesome dub feel and samples, love the bass drum reverb... gives me ideas! now the bass/sub seems a bit quiet though while the mid takes over- sounds like I'm listening to it down one of those long concrete tubes - for both tunes... maybe that's a good thing?

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Post by fubar » Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:10 pm

^cheers, hmm yea thats partly more a problem then choice because my monitors/headphones have pretty poor sub bass response, so getting the really sub bass frequencies in is a bit like painting blind, thought it might be a bit lacking in subby bizness.

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Post by thundercleese » Tue Nov 29, 2005 7:59 pm

sounds good!

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