Thank you all for your comments

I have been chatting to people and listening to the track a lot over this week and I agree with pretty much all the comments that have been given...
I'm definitely going to structure the track slightly better which was something I wanted to do, and I'm going to make parts more varied so I'm going to take out some of the ambient SFX at some point so it doesn't get as terribly grating as I assume it is for you all

I was also thinking of adding more real-life instruments in... like possibly some vibrato strings or something like that, as well as a vocal sample or two cause it could really do with it. Ideally, I'd like a voice track over the top that's been bitcrushed and distorted beyond all recognition, screaming the lyrics to the song out

but I doubt that's gonna happen lol
As well as this, I've fiddled with the EQ a fair amount and I've managed to get the bass to be really low and clear, I took out some of the reverb though I'm planning to set up a send with the bass frequencies (200Hz >) removed so the bass is still clear... I've got a friend working on it with me and also myself and
ninja_kid should be working on a remix of the finished track once that's out
Hope that's all what you wanted to hear ^.^ Should have it done over the next day or two...
Keep you all posted,
DF x